I'm still working on the shading/highlighting of the hair. I've got to take a good look in the mirror and try to figure out what the heck it is that my hair does. (Answer: whatever the heck it wants.)
Also, I doodled this at work today. Without proper lighting (or drawing for that matter) it's hard to tell that what Josh described as "olives floating in water" are actually supposed to be fireflies.
My husband is hilarious.